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Post by smith on Oct 28, 2015 20:49:34 GMT 9
Alright, I made the suggested changes. Let me know if you need anything else changed.
I still haven't found a decent header image for this story, as I can't quite find something that matches the tone, but I will put something in there as soon as I do. If you want me to use a specific image, let me know.
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Post by emilytiger on Oct 28, 2015 21:00:37 GMT 9
Thank youuuuu! There is just one more italics spot that is tiny. "I can use this" about two thirds of the way down before "he thought."
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