Post by rmedhurst on Dec 7, 2014 20:17:48 GMT 9
Sorry for the late comment. I'd like to get more involved in discussions on this forum, but don't always have time. Could you just remove that sentence "Monkey said he’d found the firework and brought it back with him."? I don't think it is essential to the story.
I had a quick double-check that "firework" wasn't a pure Britishism and as I find it in American English publications, I think I will leave it as it is. Similarly, after much thought I faintly prefer "found" to "swiped."
Feel free to put my name as "Richard." I would suggest maybe "children's stories" as a category.
I had a quick double-check that "firework" wasn't a pure Britishism and as I find it in American English publications, I think I will leave it as it is. Similarly, after much thought I faintly prefer "found" to "swiped."
Feel free to put my name as "Richard." I would suggest maybe "children's stories" as a category.
